How To: Evaluate a student's written IELTS essay

very helpful for teaching purposes, clear steps--thank you-- I have had to do similar corrections and more difficult when students ideas are flawed or not clear/linked or seemingly random. Often to do with L1 thought processes and sts trying to translate their thougts in their own first language directly into English. Would be useful to know in this example which country the student is from as it may well be that older/retired people regularly frequent or are addicted to casinos/gambling. ! If so must be money spinner for the owners of such establishmnets. Not sure either that can say that such places are immoral. Think this video is much clearer for IELTS purposes too--compared to some of your earlier ones. Overall very useful along with other material around. Thanks again.